shell4art
I have to disagree. I liked the cressendo in the last third of the piece..then in the end it had a lovely strong finish... not tooooo strong or too flashy...very tasteful..nice..

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 Akane
That was great...But I must say I agree with Snorkel...can't feel the emotion...But, great piece!

 Snorkel
Generally, it was good. I didn't find any tonal, rhythmic, or orchestrative mistakes. However, it did seem a little mechanical and bland. The fact that it was a midi file contributed to this observation, I'm sure, but I had a hard a time getting into it. I didn't quite feel it, but that has more to do with personal preferrence than orchestration or execution. Like I said, it was good, but the notes didn't jump out at me or wrestle with my feelings. I gave you 5 stars because I believe this piece was wrongly down rated from the beginning, making it appear unappealing to those who would otherwise take a listen.