muse_ishan
In hindsight, I agree. My focus was an elongated version without the restraints of the Vocal lines to capture the spirit of the melody while stretching the length of the piece. Although a bit longer than it should have been, it grew on me anyway? Thanks for your opinion, I do share your concerns. -Craig

 mclinking
I like it. It's not easy to make tunes with bells, but it works. However, I feel the tune is too long, half the length I reckon, and the repetitive motif should have been faded in and out throughout the song. As for the other motifs, it would have preferable to change volume here and there to add more character.
But that's just me, my opinion.