Snorkel
whoa whoa whoa

I don't know who bleeped me, but I did NOT use any expletives in the previous comment. Sorry for any misconceptions this may have caused.

On a more constructive note, you should try employing more rudiments in your audition pieces. Rudiments can be synthesized in many ways to make many different types of impressive beats or rhythms.

 Snorkel
I'm not sure who the !****! is that gave you a "1" for your first vote... It's no college piece but it is definitely deserving of much more than a "1."

I like how you used specific themes that you touched on with various rhythms. It was simple, however not excruciatingly so. It carries a satisfactory beat and can be enjoyed, and it grows exceedingly complex, as every audition piece should, but it lacks variety and theoretical complexity.