I don't know who bleeped me, but I did NOT use any expletives in the previous comment. Sorry for any misconceptions this may have caused.
On a more constructive note, you should try employing more rudiments in your audition pieces. Rudiments can be synthesized in many ways to make many different types of impressive beats or rhythms.
7 years ago
Snorkel I'm not sure who the !****! is that gave you a "1" for your first vote... It's no college piece but it is definitely deserving of much more than a "1."
I like how you used specific themes that you touched on with various rhythms. It was simple, however not excruciatingly so. It carries a satisfactory beat and can be enjoyed, and it grows exceedingly complex, as every audition piece should, but it lacks variety and theoretical complexity.