Aron_Tate
I liked it. I've always wanted one of those indented thingys they have that makes the music. lol I would indent some crazy stuff to put against the mini strings..

 Nick_C
Thank you that was the point of me putting it there

 Snorkel
It's not a mistake, it's tension. It's just a little hint of dissonance that gives the piece character.

 Composer_and_Arranger
KEEP THE CHORD AT 00:00:51!!! It's pretty if you look at it in a theory matter.

 lexxiee1224
good job !!!

 Nick_C
I wrote it that was way but im thinking of changing it considering everyone comments on it

 AeroHolister
at 00:00:51 that chord sounds a bit like a mistake... was it or is that the you wrote it? it just sticks out to me...so If you wrote it that way may I suggest changing it.Other wise i liked it.

 Composer_and_Arranger
Its a simple melody, but you work around it so well! I'm impressed!