Norby
It's good ; but I think these cromaticall
steps are so weird like every second would be in a new harmony. It isn't a
bad idea but it don't let people to go into your music deeper.

 Grieg-Bizet
I really enjoyed this, and it showed much more life in it than mine! I noticed how you caught on to some of the chromatics in it, and used that to good effect. An outstanding job, and thanks for fixing the high notes at the end !