Nick_C
Thanks allot!

 vanessa18
I think that song was great you play it beautifully

 wthdelio
yep i agree and i think you should just shorten it and speed it up but you could also exagerate parts that are soft and make them slower and speed up the louder notes

 Mozarteress
It's a bit long but the tune is good and I like the music around 1:28. Shorten it down and maybe speed it up a tad. Very good though!