Norby
It's got a good idea, but there are a few noob things in it.
For example the accompaniment never should be louder than the melody. NEVER. And that dissonant sounds in the end.
(B, C, D, E together) <---- It hurts my ear. Since it isn't an atonal piece it's a serious error. I suggest to learn some music-theory. It always works. It's a good piece anyway.

 Snorkel
This piece looks rather delicious, and I'm delighted that I may have found another siblius user (perchance), but for some reason my computer isn't playing the normal midi format it usually does for scorch and sibelius.

I know it's good, I just can't hear it.