Livin_Music
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow short never. I thought it was pretty long and id love to hear that at concert but just one thing I noticed that when you changed tune it chumped right into it. Do you Know what I mean. hears a few places that I noticed that: at a Miute and 20 seconds and a minute and 25 seconds. But out of all that I ratted it at a 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 bente_kwatro
its great but i've noticed that you've repeated some of the notes too many times. and there's something lacking in the middle. also, the piece is quite short..make it a longer one cuz its a piece that could go on for 5 minutes.

 musicchild
I like this peice. May I play it with my orchestra?

 Norby
I liked the allegro parts and the allusion of your previous piece in the middle (it connects the two pieces, it was a good idea). You're one of the few in this site who's got really good ideas but it still needs to work on it. Have you ever noticed that you're repeating the same melody all the time?? Write some more. Keep composing.

 Tenor-Girl
hey i loved this. really. but it needs a little more in the middle....

 douay
Can i ask what programme you got to play your composition? or was it a live performance?

 dickdona
Of course it has possibilities. Sounds like an idea or a thumbnail sketch for a longer piece. But you have to explore each "theme" to its fullest before moving on. Take your first theme and play around with it until you can't do any more with it. Then the second theme and so on. We might hear a more completed piece in a few months time. Looking forward to it....