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Aurorathe end needs some more...I don't know...It needs to be harder and louder so it has more of an effect like the middle
17 months ago
piA piano uses a grand staff.
17 months ago
flutist140Your piece was very nice, but the ending needs to have more of an effect on people. Make it like it would be a fianle!! Great job!

18 months ago
DolceBlondeIt's cute but the ending isn't as big as the middle.
two things I would try - moving sections around or make the ending more blended and add complexities.
Maybe a scale?
just a thought.
-caiti
24 months ago