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NEED HELP WITH SONG - please help

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NEED HELP WITH SONG - please help    17:04 on Tuesday, April 01, 2008 Vote for this post Vote against this post 0 votes

robzilla
(6 points)

can anyone give me some tips with this song im working on. here is the link, can u give me some general things i can work on to make it better???

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XhXJUDBjF9o


much appreciated.

robbie

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Re: NEED HELP WITH SONG - please help    06:07 on Thursday, April 03, 2008 Vote for this post Vote against this post 0 votes

axcelson
(4 points)

Good stuff--you have nice tone and a good delivery. It looks as if you are breathing from your chest rather than from your diaphragm/stomach. This leads to weakness at the end of certain phrases. A few lessons on breathing will probably help quite a bit.

Again, though, you are already quite good

Best,
Jersey Jack

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Re: NEED HELP WITH SONG - please help    17:30 on Friday, April 04, 2008 Vote for this post Vote against this post 0 votes

rockthebox
(16 points)

your delivery wasn't strong but to work on that start singing from the chest then pull through the stomach.

   

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