Hey rate my song!

Hey rate my song!

    
Hey rate my song!    11:39 on Friday, August 18, 2006          

johnbonham
(2 points)
Posted by johnbonham

this songs bout ww2

v1
Fences in old Germany,
divide the others and the free,
hitlers rule is strong you see,
his rule is there for all to see

puppets in a mater plan,
thought up by some wicked man,
their creed is stronger then their voice,
at least the martyrs have a choice

Chorus
the nation followed blindly,
and the army wanted more,
zieg heil to the kaiser,
zieg heil to the war

bridge
theres blood on the face theres
a scar on the race,
the holocaust dawns good men moved like pawns

Thats it so far, what do ya think?


Re: Hey rate my song!    15:51 on Friday, August 18, 2006          

Tool_Fan
(138 points)
Posted by Tool_Fan

Pretty good! I find WW2 fascinating.
What type of music is it? Or, what artist or band can you relate your music to?


Re: Hey rate my song!    18:50 on Sunday, August 20, 2006          

johnbonham
(2 points)
Posted by johnbonham

thanks! put this up on another site and it got pretty bad reviews! im influence by anyone from zeppelin(bonham:D) to dylan but i find this song sounds better acousticly.


   




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