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song    20:55 on Sunday, March 30, 2003 Vote for this post Vote against this post 0 votes
(ricky)
Hey i wrote this song, its not finished yet but im hoping someone could help me with this, it has forced rhyme, can anyone think of any thing i can change in it? and tell me if its an ok song for my first song

everytime i lay down in bed
the thoughts of this lady runnin threw my head
In all of my dreams i cant make out her face
I always that it was just a wast
Then this year was really crazy
I realized that you are that lady
When im walking around
and you turn the corner
all i cant do is look away

chorus:
Cuz your that lady in all of my dreams
Ive known you forever or thats how it seems

   

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