Can you give me your opinion about my last song?

Hello all!
I am a musician/songwriter, and I put on my little blog where I will post some songs of me. My website is http://alanstarr.free.fr

So don`t hesitate to go there and listen to my last song, beacuse I would like to have opinions about it!!!!

Thanks in advance!
Alan

um, i listened to part of it, and it doesnt sound very original, no offense. it sounds like an old porno song. better luck next time

i liked the first one a lot the second one to but not as much