comet
well you have a very good sound for just having started (though your sound on the low notes is not quite perfect, but still good), but you might want to pay a little more attention to (I can't remember the stupid word right now but this is good enough) how fast or slow to play the notes and use some vibrato, especially on the long notes. not trying to sound mean, just trying to help. All in all, great, especially for a newbie!

 Mstrocean
And for just starting to play the flute you are excellent!

 Mstrocean
I never thought that the flute was that beautiful, but this piece is still pretty nice.