This is a video of me and my band Fire In the Cornfield.

Please tell us what you think we need to work on.

Note: We are only 12-13 years old. (Everyone is 13 except the guitarist)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGprIk46O-E

I forgot my headphones. The knobless door with the shadow behind it is interesting for now though...

Hahaha.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm this is all very interesting hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i dont know what to say?

Haha ^ he's in the band.

For your age, the singer wrote great lyrics, though he's not the greatest singer in the world... but that will change once he's gone through puberty (I don't mean that insultingly, I can tell by how high his voice is). Also, fire your drummer immidietly. You should turn up the bass a bit as well.

why should we. hes a way better drummer then you. i agree with your bass idea to turn up the volume, but give us 1 reason to fire our drummer.

yeah thats right

Brett, chill. @Plastic, we really like our drummer, but we just want your opinion to see if you think he could improve on something.

Don't fire the drummer. Get him to take lessons if he's not already. Turn up the guitar. For this type of music, you should add a keyboard player. For now it's good, but it could be better. I susspect it will. given the fact that your all kids still.
Rock on.




www.myspace.com/darkwar1

ok thanks

Thanks. And yeah, he's been taking lessons.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=IK0zPmuosaw

This is another clip of a different song we wrote,
we're thinking of getting rid of it and doing another one instead.

yeah

BUMP.