| (jstar) | 
 I didn`t want to join soundclick to reply, so hope you check here.  
 Nice tracks!  Really enjoyed the lead guitar.  I like how you explored different sounds, feels, and paths.
 
 The rhythm tracks were both nicely done, but I personally would have liked a little varation for such long tracks. However, if you are planning to add another track of something else that has a bit more variation (such as percussion), then it would stand as a cohesive element as is.
 
 Overall, good job!  Keep writing and jamming!
 
 
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